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come to the “KNOCK YOUR SOX OFF” horse ride
Filed Under (Sports) by pukemillie on March 3, 2010
PUKEOKAHU HORSE RIDE!!!
Come to the puke horse ride . . .
. . . There is a lot of fun things to do and not to mention the veiw it is awsome way to spend the day so ride along and give it a try.It is also a fund raiser for the school so we would apreciate it if you would come and do it with us. Bye for now
Millie 
March 4th, 2010 at 8:14 am
You have a very catchy title Millie, however you need to make sure you have edited it correctly, you are missing a few very important capital letters.
The red sub-title stands out nicely. The yellow text is very hard to read, on a white background. Did you consider making the letters bold and centred? I think this would of made your advertisement for the Horse Trek stand out.